科学探索|导师“防秃”指南：审了200篇“中式英语”论文你应该这样写......( 二 ) 导师“防秃”指南：审了200篇

在这个研究中只有一种3Dmodeling tool，具体事物需要用定冠词the 。
错误句子3：
A theoretical method for calculating the inner flow-field in centrifugal impeller with splitter blades and investigation of the interactions between main and splitter blades is presented in this paper. The vortices are distributed on the main and splitter blades to simulate the effects of flows. Systematical study of number and distribution of vortices is conducted. 改正错误： investigation of the interactions前面加上an；number and distribution 前面加上the 。下面给出相关定义：

冠词：正如前面提到，a 和an是不定冠词；the 是定冠词。冠词后面是名词，名词的任何一个修辞词应该位于冠词和名词之间。
限定词：通常由一个词或者词组组成，可以“看成”形容词。通过限定词可以表示名词是泛指还是特指。例如The tree，强调树是特别所指的，是特定的；a tree表示一般意义上的树，不具特别的意义。
普通名词：人或事物的总类的名词，例如dog、house 。
可数名词：顾名思义，可以计数的名词。例如radio、streets、idea、fingernails 。
不可数名词：无法计数的名词。例如water、time 。

常见错误之二：冗长句子
在中国学生特别喜欢写长句子。原因可能是先写成中文，然后翻译成英文。因为在中文写作中，一个句子表达几个论据，非常有说服力。但在英文中，主要的论点和每一个论据一般都放在单独的句子中。
识别冗长句非常简单，直接看句子长度就可以：超过60个单词。另外，如果一个句子包含很多内容，而且论点变得不清晰了，那么及时句子的单词不多，它也是长句。通过限定每一个句子只讲述一到两个话题，可以避免文章出现过长的句子。如果作者真的想强调论据之间的关系应该通过分号隔开。
错误例子1： According to the characteristic of fan-coil air-conditioning systems, this paper derives the cooling formula of fan-coil units based on the heat transfer theories and puts forward a new method to gauge cooling named Cooling Metering on the Air- side, which can monitor the individual air-conditioning cooling consumption during a period of time by detecting the parameters of inlet air condition – temperature and humidity – of the fan-coil air-conditioning system as well as the parameters of inlet cooling water provided by the chiller. 改正错误： This paper derives the cooling formula of fan-coil units based on the characteristics of fan-coil air-conditioning systems and heat transfer theories, and puts forward a new method to gauge cooling called Cooling Metering on the Air-side. The new method can monitor individual air-conditioning cooling consumption during a period of time by detecting the condition of inlet air – temperature and humidity – of the fan-coil air-conditioning system as well as the parameters of the inlet cooling water provided by the chiller.

科学探索|导师“防秃”指南：审了200篇“中式英语”论文 你应该这样写......( 二 )

科学探索|导师“防秃”指南：审了200篇“中式英语”论文你应该这样写......( 二 )